Ritornello is a music term and means little return. i named this passage Ritornello because sometimes you can give someone the world and they possibly wouldnt even thank you.
he said: I love you.
she said she dont care.
So i wrote you a song, but you didn't say thank you, you mustn't of said it loud enough.
so i went and brought you some flowers and a box of chocolaters but i still couldnt hear it.
i told you i loved you but you didnt say it back, you prolly wasnt listening. i told you i missed you but you was busy. i told you i was upset but you was prolly not there. i told you i need you and you said...you said you didn't care.
i asked you what i did wrong, you said: what do you do right. i told you i waited for you for half the night.
so i sat in my room, letting my mind wander free and it came to me like lighting how couldnt i see, that i dont mean a thing to you, only a thing on the bottom of your shoe
i make excuses i let you be
but the end of the day you wouldnt do a thing for me.
He said: im done
She said she dont care.
he moved on and she was left striped bare.
I love that poem!
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ReplyDeleteI wrote a poem myself :
Same old story, same old ending
guess its better than pretending.
as you stand up, i fall down. but that's
just the way things go around.
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